The Outcasts Ch1: The Defeated


wrote and submitted this back in January, imagine my surprise seeing it today when I logged on.
Really like any and all comments on it since writing professionally is my goal in real life thanks.

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10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.

They will continue to be published

Its been a week has anybody read it?

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10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.

pretty nice bro

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UNOFFICIAL BIG KAHUNA OF THE UNIVERSE

The correct comment, TD, would be "Cool story, bro."

>.<

...sorry.

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Where has the rum gone!?

deadfrontier.com I did some zombie fan fiction

A wasteland and Apocalyptic Seas.

might have to dig a ways before you find them though.

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10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.

submitted the next chapter ( i guess look forward to it sometime between 2 days and six months)

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10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.

Will post each 1 of your story's per round Relic

The Outcasts Ch.2 The Discovery is up, all comments appreciated.

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10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.

Has anyone read it or has civilization fallen to such a point, that I'm better off searching for another career choice.

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10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.

bump

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10:35:19 | Karil has been defeated by Relic.
10:35:19 | Karil planet 0 Demonville has been captured by Relic, RedRum.
01:52:34 | Professor planet 0 BZ neg13 30 20 has been captured by Relic, RedRum.